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Kim's feedback for Eunah's text object

Page history last edited by kknight 5 years, 8 months ago

This is a really creative approach. In terms of content, the only suggestion I would make is to consider adding something to the conclusion about the wider implications of the findings and possibly what further research might be needed. For revision, continue to have fun with it and push the concept even further. Focus on continuing to edit and proofread for word choice, verb tense, and prepositions. I look forward to the next version.

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