You've chosen an interesting story to tell. We talked about this a little in my office but it seems a bit light on the "digital" part of digital text. Consider how incorporating other affordances of a website might help you to tell this story. Also, I know we talked about each object being a repetition of the same content in different form, so I am guessing that may also lead to some revision. And finally, be sure to read closely for typographical errors and consider a larger font size. I look forward to the next version!