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Kim's feedback for Katie's text

Page history last edited by kknight 6 years, 9 months ago

You've chosen an interesting story to tell. We talked about this a little in my office but it seems a bit light on the "digital" part of digital text. Consider how incorporating other affordances of a website might help you to tell this story. Also, I know we talked about each object being a repetition of the same content in different form, so I am guessing that may also lead to some revision. And finally, be sure to read closely for typographical errors and consider a larger font size. I look forward to the next version!

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Katie Lopez said

at 1:44 pm on Mar 4, 2014

Thank you, Professor Knight, you're feedback is helpful. Like I mentioned to you earlier I am changing my story. I am using the same base text but instead of telling three different stories I am consolidating it into one more cohesive story. I also think this will allow for a better still, sound, and video object. It is now more clear to me that I need to tell the EXACT same story through all my text objects. Thank you.

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