I enjoy the simplicity of your moving image object, focusing on one event. Now, I think you have positioned yourself to push this and have it show more of Jasmine’s personality. For example, so she is drinking and potentially doing the dreaded drunk dial, what happens if she leaves a message and really gets to express herself. When the camera zooms in on her phone, it is particularly blurry and I couldn’t tell that she was searching for Aladdin. If this was intentional because she is drinking, then touché. If not, you may want to reshoot. For revision, think of how you can add more drama to the piece by giving Jasmine a voice.