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Kim's feedback for Kristin's sound object

Page history last edited by kknight 10 years, 5 months ago

Your sound object has quite a melancholy feel to it. I'm unsure whether that is what you intended. In terms of pacing or narrativity, you may need to edit out some of the repeated refrains. Otherwise the piece does seem to have much in the way of narrativity because the emotional tone overs around the same place for the entire duration and it feels repetitive. For revision, focus on the pacing of the piece to improve narrativity.