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Kim's sound feedback for Cindy

Page history last edited by kknight 7 years, 7 months ago

 

Pleasant to listen to though it gets to be a bit repetitive in the long middle section. By the time it gets to 0:25 I find my mind wandering a bit. The changeup at 0:30 is nice but I think it takes too long to get there and then that continues on a bit too long. The opening and closing sounds seem to signal the beginning and end of a phone call (only thinking this because I read your description, so you may want to craft a title that signals that to the listener) so I guess I would say for revision maybe focus more on the cadences of a call in the middle section.

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