I think the story or argument of your image object is:

I think the the pictures are like a timeline/documentation of a journey.

If the images have been manipulated, how does that add to or detract from the source material?

I feel that the manipulation to the images adds to the source material.  The images all ahve the same color tint to them and together the photos work well with one another.

I think the intended audience is:

I think the audience will like the story that is being told.  I believe that it was successful in creating a story.

I think the portfolio theme is:

Personal travels.

Is the aesthetic of the piece successful? Why or why not?

Yes, all the images work well together.

In what ways is the image object successful or needing improvement in the use of: color or shading, composition, relationship between images (or images and other material), use of focus, or any medium-specific signifiers?

I feel that the images do not need any improvement.

Is the attribution of any borrowed material clear? How can it be improved?

Yes it is very clear.

Additional comments on this object or suggestions for the portfolio:

I'm really interested in hearing what this story is. Good job.