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Kim's text feedback for Yuki

Page history last edited by kknight 7 years, 9 months ago

You really did a nice job with this. The colors in the heading work nicely with the idea of the JRT. The text is well-written and has lots of appropriate links. I know we talked about incorporating more shaped text, but honestly, this already works very well. The section headings break up the text nicely and it is very readable. Maybe a few photos of proper leash technique or a happy and trusting dog would round it out nicely.

 

For revision, work on proof reading and copy-editing. Otherwise, focus on the things that you would like to improve.

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