What is unclear or confusing about the work?

Nothing, your work was extremely easy to follow and the story was great.

Does this work reach the intended audience? Why or why not?

It can fit any audience range as the story has pieces that many people can relate to.

In what ways does this form support the content?

The online text lends itself to easily being read and gives the familiarity of a book.

What would you add or subtract from this work?

I felt like the story would be incredibly powerful on a shoe or on a shoe box, but for this text object I think it works wonderfully.

What does the reader take away from this piece?

The reader takes away a great story and a piece that they can easily relate to.

*If adapting material, how does this work amplify or bring new perspective to the meaning of the source material?