What is unclear or confusing about the work? The text was very creative and linear. 

Does this work reach the intended audience? Why or why not? I feel the intended audience would read this text and easily understand the story. 

In what ways does this form support the content? 

The form is traditional, and makes the story straight forward, linear and clear. 

What would you add or subtract from this work? 

I'd add links, to try and make it more interesting or complex. 

What does the reader take away from this piece? 

A great, funny story. Easily read, and interpreted. 

*If adapting material, how does this work amplify or bring new perspective to the meaning of the source material?