Doug's Feedback for Autumn


What is unclear or confusing about the work?

It is very clear. I understood the point right away. 

 

Does this work reach the intended audience? Why or why not?

It does. My main suggestion would be to say more about your personal opinion on memes. Maybe even create your own. 

 

In what ways does this form support the content?

Memes are a part of the online world and the links and sources help to support her points. I do think more links and examples could help strengthen your point.   

 

What would you add or subtract from this work?

As I stated I would like to see more links and examples. 

 

What does the reader take away from this piece?

A better understanding of what memes are. As well as how memes are evaluated by someone who is around them on a daily basis. 

 


*If adapting material, how does this work amplify or bring new perspective to the meaning of the source material?