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Kim's feedback for Jennifer's image object

Page history last edited by kknight 4 years, 4 months ago

These images of the two of you are so sweet. I almost feel like I can’t give you feedback on them. As with the text object, these images seem to depict a very one-dimensional approach to the narrative of this long-distance relationship. The drawings are very cute, but as a viewer, the switch from the drawings to the photos is a bit confusing. Perhaps if they were interspersed more or if the sequence were all drawings, it might not seem like the viewer is looking at two separate projects. If you are sticking with this narrative, for revision focus on adding dimension to the images.

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